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It was a good story and animated quite well, however, i have noticed that your animations are all very short. your blog says that you spent about 2 or 3 months on this, so i recommend that you take about 6 or 7 months and dedicate most of it on a single animation. it will be tough, but the payoff will be amazing and no doubt earn you another couple of awards
Solid animation +3
Amazing story +4
Solid sound +3
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Short -2